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The House That Stayed Awake.

  • Writer: Afia Pomaa Agyei
    Afia Pomaa Agyei
  • Jan 13
  • 2 min read

The House That Stayed Awake

Everyone slept when the lights went out.

Everyone except Efua.

The power cut came suddenly, the way it always did—mid-thought, mid-breath. The fan slowed, sighed, then stopped. Darkness filled the room like water.

Efua lay still, listening.

In the distance, generators coughed to life. Somewhere, a baby cried. Somewhere else, laughter floated—unbothered, careless.

Her phone buzzed once.

No notification. No message.

Just vibration.

She checked anyway.

12:47 a.m.

Battery: 9%.

Efua sighed and placed the phone face-down. She had learned not to expect anything at night. Good news never arrived after midnight. People only remembered you in the morning.

She closed her eyes.

Then the house made a sound.

Not a creak. Not wind.

Footsteps.

Slow. Deliberate.

Her heart climbed into her throat.

She held her breath, counting the seconds the way her mother had taught her when fear came—one… two… three…

The footsteps stopped outside her door.

Efua did not move.

She remembered the stories her aunt used to tell—about houses that listened, about walls that remembered things people tried to forget. She used to laugh at them.

Not tonight.

A knock came.

Soft. Respectful.

Who knocks like that at night?

“Efua,” a voice said.

It was familiar. Too familiar.

Her chest tightened.

No one in this house said her name like that anymore.

Her mother had been gone for four years.

Efua sat up slowly, her feet touching the cold floor. She wanted to answer. She wanted to believe. But belief had hurt her before.

“Efua,” the voice came again, quieter now. “You left the light on.”

Her breath broke.

She hadn’t left a light on in years.

The generator across the street went silent. The house fell into a deeper darkness, the kind that presses against your skin.

Efua whispered, “Who is there?”

No answer.

Instead, the footsteps moved away.

Slow. Unhurried.

By morning, the power returned. The house looked ordinary again—walls, doors, silence pretending nothing happened.

But on Efua’s bedside table sat something that hadn’t been there before.

A matchstick.

Burnt at one end.

She stared at it for a long time before whispering,

“I turned the light off.”

The house did not respond.

But it stayed awake.

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